The very crux of your writing while appearing reasonable originally, did not work well with me personally after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you actually were able to make me a believer unfortunately just for a short while. I nevertheless have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do well to help fill in all those gaps. If you actually can accomplish that, I could undoubtedly end up being amazed. Gae Itch Levesque